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Issue 2 - Party Like It's 198X - Page 28 - Watchin' Ghostbusties
Jessica Safron:
When I sat down to start sketching this out, I took a look at the script and this was the only thing written for this page:
--- Quote ---Sam is sitting in Eddie’s room, watching Ghostbusties on Eddie’s little TV. He looks like he’s tripping on something as he jacks off. The busty ghost girl in the TV turns toward him and beckons him. Sam grins and crawls into the TV and begins making out with her. But then she goes all The Shining on him and Sam is terrified and surrounded by ghosts.
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No dialogue, no sound effects. Seemed sort of odd for Sam to be watching porn on mute. Since Adam was sleeping and I couldn't consult him, I took it upon myself to write the dialogue for this page. Except the name "Peter Spankman." Credit goes to our friend Gregg Samsa for suggesting that. Thanks.
Adam Dravian:
Hey, I told you to add the "Me?!" So it's not like I completely failed as the comic's writer...
Michigander1911:
For starters, it's awesome to get your input this week Jess. You did a hell of a job coming up with awesome dialogue, and made the whole trippy page look like it was happening.
Greg gets the awesome award for Peter Spankman.
Okay page is totally badass. Ghost Busties seems like it is the film we all expected it would be. Plus it went to a crazy place from whatever hallucinogenic Sam took before watching porn.
Ghost babe looks great for a ghost at least until she goes all "The Shining" anyway. I also really dig the ghost monster with the Boobies on it's tongue.
Michigander1911:
--- Quote from: Adam Dravian on January 16, 2015, 07:58:30 PM ---Hey, I told you to add the "Me?!" So it's not like I completely failed as the comic's writer...
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It's all good Adam sometimes you just have to give your illustrator artistic freedom.
Rae:
:) I think this is my favorite page so far.
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