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Issue 3 - Ninja Power! - Page 16 - Baby Moondreamer
Rijst:
Big aha-moment here about gramps, yes people often come out of a stroke very different from before. She doesn't seem to have any major physical limitations though so I guess she's lucky.
Adam Dravian:
We just updated this page, after getting some feedback. Nothing too major, but there are lots of little changes, so those who saw the page earlier might want to give it another read over.
Michigander1911:
--- Quote from: Adam Dravian on March 20, 2016, 08:50:14 PM ---We just updated this page, after getting some feedback. Nothing too major, but there are lots of little changes, so those who saw the page earlier might want to give it another read over.
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I'm so horrible I can't tell. LOL you would have to give us some hints.
Adam Dravian:
--- Quote from: Michigander1911 on March 21, 2016, 07:59:21 AM ---
--- Quote from: Adam Dravian on March 20, 2016, 08:50:14 PM ---We just updated this page, after getting some feedback. Nothing too major, but there are lots of little changes, so those who saw the page earlier might want to give it another read over.
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I'm so horrible I can't tell. LOL you would have to give us some hints.
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Like I said, it's nothing major. Jessica altered some of the shading, the direction some the character's eyes are looking, added in a hint of Eddie's dresser and baby picture in panel 4. Also added the baby picture in panel 2, and added the Eddie and Joe picture into some of the panels. Probably the most notable change is that Alex now starts to respond to Eddie before getting distracted by seeing his baby picture. All minor things that I'm not at all surprised you missed.
Michigander1911:
--- Quote from: Adam Dravian on March 21, 2016, 03:28:30 PM ---
--- Quote from: Michigander1911 on March 21, 2016, 07:59:21 AM ---
--- Quote from: Adam Dravian on March 20, 2016, 08:50:14 PM ---We just updated this page, after getting some feedback. Nothing too major, but there are lots of little changes, so those who saw the page earlier might want to give it another read over.
--- End quote ---
I'm so horrible I can't tell. LOL you would have to give us some hints.
--- End quote ---
Like I said, it's nothing major. Jessica altered some of the shading, the direction some the character's eyes are looking, added in a hint of Eddie's dresser and baby picture in panel 4. Also added the baby picture in panel 2, and added the Eddie and Joe picture into some of the panels. Probably the most notable change is that Alex now starts to respond to Eddie before getting distracted by seeing his baby picture. All minor things that I'm not at all surprised you missed.
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While I don't remember not seeing this stuff, the changes are great. Jess you do an excellent job of filling in the background with so much detail I always feel like I'm missing something when I read the pages. I think a big part of that is that I'm not a true "comic book" reader I tend to have a hard time paying attention to the art sometimes. I know I'm getting better though especially looking for facial expression and eye glances. I try to follow the story panel to panel after my initial read through hoping to get a broader prospective of whats happening.
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