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Discuss Comic Pages / Re: Issue 3 - Ninja Power! - Page 34 - Banging Veronica

« on: October 19, 2016, 08:40:26 PM »

what's up with the soap bottle and tissue box???

I'll just clarify that it's a lotion bottle he's holding, not soap. Apparently Dean has dry skin and perhaps a runny nose.

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Discuss Comic Pages / Re: Issue 3 - Ninja Power! - Page 34 - Banging Veronica

« on: October 18, 2016, 04:27:50 AM »

*laughs* The helmet. So great.

Yeah, the helmet totally makes the page for me. That, and I love the expressions on Dean's face in the bottom panels. He just looks so hateable.

The helmet is great. The football though, just a prop I hope..?

God dammit, Rijst! Hahaha!

Whoa, I can't believe how close I was to correctly guessing what's playing on the TV!  If anyone wants to know what I'm talking about, then take a look at the commentary for page 33.

Yeah man, great job. ::high-five:: Also, we've updated that page, so everyone should totally go check out the changes.

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Discuss Comic Pages / Re: Issue 3 - Ninja Power! - Page 33 - Slater Mansion

« on: October 18, 2016, 04:18:55 AM »

First of all, I can't believe that Eddie's actually going to try and rob the Slater's mansion.  Also, I can't believe how easy it is for Eddie to get in.  Heck, he didn't even have to contend with guard dogs like the ninjas who tried to rob the Moore's mansion.

That's mostly due to us needing to move the story along at a faster pace so we can get to the plot point that ends this issue. The Slater mansion has a special type of security that Eddie sneaked past in the yard, but don't worry, you'll get to see when he encounters the same type of security in the house.

Anyway, after giving this page a second look, some things jumped out at me that it's lacking, so it'll be getting a minor update sometime in the next couple days.

This page has now been updated, and we're a lot happier with it. Here's what's been added/changed:

• The Narrator Dude has busted back into the comic to set the scene for the page
• The balcony in the first panel has been totally redrawn in more detail (perhaps too much detail)
• Two patrolling security robots have been added to the yard
• Sam now has dialogue referencing Eddie sneaking past the robots
• Added a thought balloon to Eddie in the bottom-left panel, trying to justify his crimes (that panel was looking really weird to us without a thought balloon, so I typed up several options of what Eddie could be thinking, and let Jessica pick

We considered adding some thought balloons to the final panels. Maybe something like:

EDDIE (thought): Shit, it's Dean!
EDDIE (thought): Oh, just a statue.

But we think the art conveys what's going on well enough without balloons being tossed in and cluttering it up.

[EDIT: This is weird. No matter how many times I modify this post to remove the extra "/list" at the end, it keeps returning.][/list]

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Discuss Anything / Re: Miroslav Satan

« on: October 18, 2016, 04:03:12 AM »

Haha, I can't say I expected to come here and find a post that combined hockey and Satan, but I'm not complaining.

My sports knowledge doesn't extend beyond the sports games I used to play for the NES and Super Nintendo. But even then, I gravitated to the more fantastical sports titles like Bill Laimbeer's Combat Basketball and Baseball Simulator 1.000.

I do know of the Jersey Devils, though, mostly thanks to the episode of Seinfeld where Puddy does his face up like a devil.

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Discuss Comic Pages / Re: Issue 3 - Ninja Power! - Page 34 - Banging Veronica

« on: October 17, 2016, 02:35:52 PM »

........Interesting page

Hah, thanks!

*laughs* The helmet. So great.

Yeah, the helmet totally makes the page for me. That, and I love the expressions on Dean's face in the bottom panels. He just looks so hateable.

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Discuss Comic Pages / Issue 3 - Ninja Power! - Page 34 - Banging Veronica

« on: October 16, 2016, 10:02:31 PM »

Whoa! Our first page to feature full-blown banging. If you’re worried the comic is going to devolve into full-on erotica, fear not, as this is about as far as we’re going to take that element (on the other hand, if you were hoping the comic would go full porn, then, uh, sorry).

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Discuss Comic Pages / Re: Issue 3 - Ninja Power! - Page 33 - Slater Mansion

« on: October 06, 2016, 01:12:44 PM »

Oh man you guys got me watching naked gun clips for an hour now..

Well that that point you might as well watch the whole movie.

I don't think I've ever watched any of the Naked Gun movies. At least not in their entirety. As far as those sort of farcical comedies go, Hot Shots! Part Deux was my favorite when I was in my early teens. Not sure how it'd hold up for me now. Of course, my current favorite farce comedy would be Kung Fury.

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Discuss Comic Pages / Re: Issue 3 - Ninja Power! - Page 33 - Slater Mansion

« on: October 05, 2016, 07:56:54 AM »

Okay, so is it going to be anything like this scene from The Naked Gun?

Ha, nailed it! But seriously, I wonder how many panels it would take to accurately portray that scene, with all the fast-paced sight gags. Probably at least five pages worth. Unless the panels were really small, I guess.

I assume that some of the artwork she's working on involves the book you're releasing, right?

Yep, but first she's doing art for an upcoming novel by this dude named Mike Leon. His is the priority right now since he payed her with money and I only pay her in cuddles.

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Discuss Comic Pages / Re: Issue 3 - Ninja Power! - Page 33 - Slater Mansion

« on: October 04, 2016, 07:39:08 AM »

Couldn't you just use the narrator dude to describe how Eddie's feeling, or perhaps use a thought bubble?  As for suspenseful music, the reader could listen to one of the synth music tracks from the unofficial soundtrack or perhaps maybe something like the Mission Impossible theme song or if the person's feeling kinda silly, then perhaps something like Rock Lobster.

If we really wanted to bring out the suspense in this scene, we'd need to slow down the pace a bit, but like I said before, we need to reach the end point of the Issue before it gets too big to be printed as a standard comic issue. So Eddie breaking into the Slater mansion will be played more for comedy than suspense.

However, one of the changes that Jessica will be implementing to the page does bring back the Narrator Dude, as it seemed like a fitting time to use him. We haven't implemented the changes yet because Jessica's currently scrambling to finish art for some books that are coming out in October. She's just about done, then she'll be back to kicking ass on the comic.

Another thing, the whole Eddie going into stealth mode and the exclamation point kinda reminds me of Metal Gear.  Who knows, maybe Eddie will end up sneaking around in a cardboard box or there'll be a guard that says, "I feel asleep" or something.

Heheh, yeah. It's impossible for me to see an exclamation point appear over a character's head and not think of Metal Gear.

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Discuss Comic Pages / Re: Issue 3 - Ninja Power! - Page 33 - Slater Mansion

« on: September 26, 2016, 01:46:42 PM »

I considered a life-size statue of myself once but because of my financial situation I had to make do with a cardboard cut out..

Haha, good to know that I'm not the only one.

The suspense is building up on this page, not least because this is still Eddie and he tends to screw things up.

As I was writing this page, it occurred to me that the comic medium doesn't lend itself well to tension-filled sneaking-type scenes. In a film, you can see the character creeping along, and then feel the suspense as they hide in the shadows as a security guard passes or whatever. And of course it's aided by suspenseful music and editing that helps build and maintain the suspense.

In a book, you can use descriptive prose to build suspense by talking about things like the sneaking character's heart hammering and sweat trickling down his sides as he slowly reaches for a doorknob, so nervous that he's holding his breath in anticipation...

But in a comic, you have to work with still images. You can't control how long the reader will linger on each panel, so that makes it really hard to build suspense for this type of scene. Not that it's impossible to have a suspenseful sneaking scene in a comic, but it's certainly not a strength of the medium.

Anyway, after giving this page a second look, some things jumped out at me that it's lacking, so it'll be getting a minor update sometime in the next couple days.

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Discuss Anything / Re: Hang out with Jessica while she draws in Twitch

« on: September 26, 2016, 01:29:01 PM »

We really enjoyed this Twitch stuff, although the Android app doesn't display live feeds for some reason so I'll use the website again next time..

Yeah, it's been a lot a fun, so I'm sure we'll keep doing it.

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Discuss Anything / Hang out with Jessica while she draws in Twitch

« on: September 23, 2016, 03:53:34 PM »

We've done some Twitch streams in the past where Jessica has played video games, but recently she's started streaming herself drawing stuff (including Satan Ninja). You dudes should totally come hang out with her while she draws (I'm usually there too): https://www.twitch.tv/jessicasafron

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Discuss Comic Pages / Re: Issue 3 - Ninja Power! - Page 33 - Slater Mansion

« on: September 22, 2016, 03:37:54 AM »

First of all, I can't believe that Eddie's actually going to try and rob the Slater's mansion.  Also, I can't believe how easy it is for Eddie to get in.  Heck, he didn't even have to contend with guard dogs like the ninjas who tried to rob the Moore's mansion.

That's mostly due to us needing to move the story along at a faster pace so we can get to the plot point that ends this issue. The Slater mansion has a special type of security that Eddie sneaked past in the yard, but don't worry, you'll get to see when he encounters the same type of security in the house.

As for what's playing on the TV, could it possibly be one of the Dean and Trish sex tapes?

That's actually a great guess. You'll find out how close you are as soon as the next page goes live (hopefully sooner than in two weeks).

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Discuss Comic Pages / Issue 3 - Ninja Power! - Page 33 - Slater Mansion

« on: September 21, 2016, 05:38:24 PM »

You can't really tell on this page, but Eddie has unknowingly entered the house at Dean's bedroom. So of course he has a life-size statue of himself. Jessica considered having Eddie encounter a cardboard cutout of Dean instead, but I thought a statue would be funnier and better portray just how rich the Slaters are.

The statue is being back-lit by the only current light source in the room, which is coming from a TV.

Oh man, just wait'll you see what's playing on that TV...

Lately, our updates have been coming out waaay too slowly, and we're working to fix that. Right now is a super busy time for Jessica, as she's currently juggling several projects at once. But we've worked out a new schedule for her and that seems to be helping.

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Discuss Anything / Re: Satan Ninja 201X?

« on: September 17, 2016, 09:58:17 PM »

We see in the years to come...

Heather Hyser gets elected mayor of River City in 200X.

Valery “Viper” Viperelli gets a job investigating government corruption(he knew the territory! )

"Psycho Sam" is currently residing in the state nut house!!!

Stanley "Trance" Sheen heads up his own robotics firm and eventually buys out the Pizza Wizard franchise.

Dean Slater is appointed ambassador to Guam(at least that's what he says...)

Corey Cusack is River City Police commissioner

Eddie McCarthy has dropped off the radar and hasn't been heard from since...!

The rest I'll leave up to YOU!

Heh, very interesting. Some odd choices there, especially Heather, Corey, and Dean. Anyway, I can't promise all these characters will survive 198X, let alone make it to 200X.

Do you feel that Heather and Dean are NOT the types to go into politics?!? 

I don't imagine Dean being very good at public speaking, and his interests are too narrow (cars, babes, football) for him to have much of a desire for politics.

As for Heather, she's much smarter than Dean (smarter than most would assume, actually), but I don't think she has an interest in politics. I could see her being a writer or maybe a fashion designer.

I'm not even sure that Corey would ever go into law enforcement...! 

Even if Corey was interesting in being a cop, he'd probably never make it past the police academy. I could actually see Corey going into politics, because he likes to hear himself speak and he likes to run things. However, he's more likely to end up running his own hole-in-the-wall comic book shop, where he could constantly feel like King Nerd as he schools his younger clients about all things geeky.