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Issue 3 - Ninja Power! - Page 33 - Slater Mansion
Rijst:
Oh man you guys got me watching naked gun clips for an hour now..
Adam Dravian:
--- Quote from: Rijst on October 06, 2016, 09:47:38 AM ---Oh man you guys got me watching naked gun clips for an hour now..
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Well that that point you might as well watch the whole movie.
I don't think I've ever watched any of the Naked Gun movies. At least not in their entirety. As far as those sort of farcical comedies go, Hot Shots! Part Deux was my favorite when I was in my early teens. Not sure how it'd hold up for me now. Of course, my current favorite farce comedy would be Kung Fury.
Adam Dravian:
--- Quote from: Adam Dravian on September 22, 2016, 03:37:54 AM ---
--- Quote from: Magnetron on September 21, 2016, 09:02:43 PM ---First of all, I can't believe that Eddie's actually going to try and rob the Slater's mansion. Also, I can't believe how easy it is for Eddie to get in. Heck, he didn't even have to contend with guard dogs like the ninjas who tried to rob the Moore's mansion.
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That's mostly due to us needing to move the story along at a faster pace so we can get to the plot point that ends this issue. The Slater mansion has a special type of security that Eddie sneaked past in the yard, but don't worry, you'll get to see when he encounters the same type of security in the house.
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--- Quote from: Adam Dravian on September 26, 2016, 01:46:42 PM ---Anyway, after giving this page a second look, some things jumped out at me that it's lacking, so it'll be getting a minor update sometime in the next couple days.
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This page has now been updated, and we're a lot happier with it. Here's what's been added/changed:
* The Narrator Dude has busted back into the comic to set the scene for the page
* The balcony in the first panel has been totally redrawn in more detail (perhaps too much detail)
* Two patrolling security robots have been added to the yard
* Sam now has dialogue referencing Eddie sneaking past the robots
* Added a thought balloon to Eddie in the bottom-left panel, trying to justify his crimes (that panel was looking really weird to us without a thought balloon, so I typed up several options of what Eddie could be thinking, and let Jessica pick
We considered adding some thought balloons to the final panels. Maybe something like:
EDDIE (thought): Shit, it's Dean!
EDDIE (thought): Oh, just a statue.
But we think the art conveys what's going on well enough without balloons being tossed in and cluttering it up.
[EDIT: This is weird. No matter how many times I modify this post to remove the extra "/list" at the end, it keeps returning.][/list]
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