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Issue 1 - Video Dreamer - Page 6 - Pizza & Friends
« on: March 01, 2014, 04:49:59 AM »


And now we get to meet some of Eddie's other friends. Like Corey. It seems like whenever he's around, the dude ends up taking over the scene because he never shuts his fucking mouth. I can't help it—he's just too easy to write.

I ended up having to pare down a lot of dialogue in this page (and it's still dialogue heavy). Having written a novel and a bunch of short stories, I wasn't used to the extremely limited space you have with comic panels. But I think learning to write for a comic has taught me lessons that should hopefully carry over into my non-comic writing.
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